Monday, August 8, 2011

Will you critique my poem 'Contempt'?

very cool poem especially the closing line. i think you made a really important point that love can vanquish most of our demons. demons we secretly nurture, i guess its hard being human sometimes and life isnt really easy. Perhaps if we loved each other a little more, we could make it a little easier for ourselves to realise we could be so much better.

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